|Reviews for The Girl Goonie|
| TeamPiper 5/15/13 . chapter 16
This was such an amazing story! Mute is an amazing character! Thank you for writing this story! It would really mean a lot to me if you could read/review my story Not Standing Down. Critique coming from you would be AMAZING!
| Guest 5/5/13 . chapter 15
| Geekdirectioner 5/5/13 . chapter 8
| Lilly 4/18/13 . chapter 16
I AM SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO(1 million SO's later) SO SO SO SO SO SOOORRYY About being so slefish and rude, jerk face, whatever I was. Just I am SOOO excited since there will be a sequal. YAH SEQUAL(Punches self in the face and knocks out)
| Lilly 4/18/13 . chapter 16
I am so sorry, if anything else gets posted,I will iron my hands(LOl from Harry Potter 2)
Anyway here lhat was happening to me
I have a case called Rumernosis
A boy in school said that I liked him in front of the whole class
I am auditioning for my school play(Charlie and the Chocolate Factory) the part of Veruca(wish me luck)
i have a huge chest pain from hiccups
| Lilly 4/17/13 . chapter 1
And actually.. I have the continuation for my previous review:
Once that happens as said in my previous post, this is what I think should happen next:
Chuck then notices that Brains is a boy nickname and he says: Hey wait a second? Your friends called you Brains right? Thats a BOYS name. Dana: Well, maybe you could test me out and see if I deserve the nickname Brains. Who is the smartest person in your little gang of friends? Everyone points at Data. Mouth: Its definatly Data, you wanna compete with him in a Brainathon? Well, its on and for shure Data is going to win. Dana: You can't be so shure LoudMouth. We would just have to wait and see.
After a little while the gang comes up with extra hard questions on the following
subjects: Algebra, Chemistry and History. Dana is the one who gets most of the questions right and if Data got some questions right, then mostly they said the
Answer at the same time.
Mouth: Well, looks like I am wrong. You are smarter than we think we are. But I don't thThink this thing will work out. We have Alexandria as a girl goonie and we don't
need anymore girl goonies. Dana: What are Goonies? Mikey: You are pretty smart but I
Can't believe that you don't know what a Goonie is. WE are the Goonies. And I think we may need another smart person to compete with Data once in a while. Dana smiles and
Mikey makes her take the Goonie pledge. And after that the adventure begins
Please take all of my suggestions. I would really appreciate it.
| Geekdirectioner 4/18/13 . chapter 16
Nah it's ok :) Just don't legit punch yourself in the face and knock yourself out :( AND I should be able to post the first chapter tonight :)
| Lilly 4/16/13 . chapter 15
More info on Dana!
She wears here hair down like Violet from the Incredibles. Then, after the adventure, she wears her hair in a braid
| Lilly 4/16/13 . chapter 15
Sorry if I did something bad,
I am reading your fanfic over and over
I have best idea for a crush for Dana is Data
Stick with Dana and Data will ya?
Since they are both smart you know... a great bond can be put there.
And can Dana be the new girl in school?
And you know... I think you should make a sequal about an indian pirate adventure
And i think you should stick with Mute/Muse, Dana, Stef, and Andy as the girl goonies. You don't need a Mouth's crush you should make it Stef/Mouth which makes more sense
And Another boy Goonie... doesn't make sense... unless it is Dana's older more overprotective brother who is Brand's age!
| Lilly 4/15/13 . chapter 14
I don't think another boy goonie fits into the story, and Stef or Andy's sister too, I think it better off with just Dana added, And MAKE A SEQUAL
| Lilly 4/14/13 . chapter 15
Also.. here is something I forgot to mention about Dana:
She always wears her hair messy and down. However, after the Goonie's second adventure, Dana then began to wear a black headband
And an idea for a Goonies sequal:
It has been a few months after the Goonie's adventure. A month before school ended, Dana is the new girl at school at became friends with Alexandria or Mute. On the last day of school Data meets Dana in the hallway when she dropps her books. The two become friends as well and Data introduces Dana to the Goonies. When the Chuck asks her "Whats your name?" She says "My name is Dana, but my friends called me "Brains" my last name is Meeker" you can add the rest. You should make the sequal adventurous, mysterious, and something like a movie. Think of it as your writing a script. You must put action. Thats what I think you should add
| Lilly 4/14/13 . chapter 13
I have an idea who Dana could like(please suggest it) It would obviosly be Data because of how many similarities they have. Well.. the only similarity is that they are both smart but Dana is only smarter. And Data teaches her a perfect lesson in the sequal: Friendship, Love, and most importantly Bravery. And also.. can there be a love traingle between Data, Dana, and Mouth(Mouth is the one that likes Dana and Dana likes Data. But there is at one point in the sequal were Mouth tells Dana that he likes her but is rejected by Dana because she says she likes someone else and Mouth gets curious about who she likes) You can make it as complicated as you like between them
| Geekdirectioner 4/15/13 . chapter 15
| Lilly 4/13/13 . chapter 12
Great Fanfic. I Love it. Do y mind if you make me a fanfic?
Here is the character:
Name Dana Meeker
Looks: Dark brown hair(Dark dark brown as in REALLY Dark brown), wears glasses, skinny
Personality she is smart, sweet, the smartest besides Data, gentle, brave, intelligent, clumzy, awkward when it comes to boys
Crush: Mikey and Data(she kind of likes Data, but mainly likes Mikey
Who is crushing on her: Mikey, Mouth, and a Data a little bit
Quotes: Come on guys we can do this! You gotta be kidding,
Best Friend: Data and Mikey
PLEASE DO THIS! PLEASE MAKE THIS! CAN IT BE SIMILAR TO YOURS?
| xxxMadameMysteryxxx 4/14/13 . chapter 15
brilliant, i loved every chapter can't wait to read wat else you've come up with : )