Quite... umm... funny? This reminds me of a sylvari character I wrote who for some strange reason smelled like catnip, and ends up in the company of a pair of charr. Funny thing though, one charr is immune to the effects of catnip (she just smells nice) while the other _...

Yeah, in the end I scrapped that idea, but I find it funny you decided to do something similar, but in reverse, and far more troublesome. Your asura character, Tivi is hilarious and was an instant fave. Xander is convincing and Rubusa is pure XD.

I look forward to your next chapter!

This is hilarious. Great to see more writing from you, I so loved Diplomacy and this is great fun to read. You do awkward humour very well, and that's quite a compliment coming from me, as a lot of embarrassment comedy just makes me cringe rather than laugh.

Also, though I had to look up what the races looked like, you manage to write something that even I, who have never played guild wards, find funny, so well done there.

Please update this. I miss it!

Alright, so since you're the one that finally got me into gear and putting my own story to paper you can't cop out on me now! Keep going!

Amazing story it's so funny how the girls are trying not to fall for him can't wait for the next chapter

Love this story! Keep at it!

I get the feeling Xander will end up with a horde of different women following him around lol.

Amusing chapter.

I really like this story! Not many people make fanfictions on mmo games. I really like the exchanging between those two. They seem to almost be like brother vs sister.

You've crossed over from WoW to GW2? Maybe?

I'm happy. :D

You write some of the best gaming fan-fiction on the internet so it's good to see you dabbling in the GW2 universe. This is a great start and I like how you characterized the asura - so completely focused on things she shouldn't be focused on, even if the things occupying her attention are totally atypical for an asuran.

Good, good stuff.

Good job. It's interesting to see an Asura that is actually artistic instead of intellectually smart. I'm actually curious to know what the curse. And why Xander got cursed in the first place.

Keep up the good work and I'm hoping you Post the next chapter up soon.

Lol this is amusing. I like Tivi, whe absent mindedness is adorable, but I imagine it could get a lite frustrating in person hehe.

Also what does he smell like? Pheromones? Sex? Pizza?

Thanks for posting.

Great start. Glad to see you writing again! Can't wait to see where this goes, especially considering that I've gotten into this game recently.