hmm...I wonder what is going on with Betty...
omg this is good! :P

Oh oh. I feel some hesitation from Betty. I hope not. Why is she always so scared?!

Love where this is going though! Great chapter.

Poor Daniel. Sometimes I really don't understand Betty. After all Daniel gone through. Hope that you will update soon.

Poor Daniel! I don't understand what Betty's problem is. She should sympathize with Daniel. After everything he went through with Molly, he knows that life is too short.

Oh. EM. Gee. This is going to be so good.

First of all, I love the music you put so much thought into. Who doesn't love Bryan Adams? And if they don't, I don't want to know them. Lol.

And I perfectly envisioned that whole proposal. Amazing. Can't wait to read more!

I am crying!

Looking forward to reading what happens next!

Great start and simple, but beautiful proposal. I really hope this won't be another short movie though. Do you have the whole plot figured out?

Great first chapter! I hope they can come up with a compromise. That was a very romantic proposal. 3

Aww...so sweet! It does sound very much like a fairy tale. Can't wait to see what Daniel does about their dilemma.