|Reviews for The One He Left Behind|
| Mark 3/27/13 . chapter 13
Like I said before, Please continue the story. Also I think the paint is meant for Sherlock's brownstone.
| Mark 3/27/13 . chapter 12
Here's an idea. The number 13 bugs me, don't end the story on that chapter. Besides there are so many issues raised in your story Ithink it wouldnbe premature.
| mark 3/27/13 . chapter 11
Sorry about the lack of reviews from me. I usually review stories after the second read through. Love this one so far.
Also Kwangju to e for Joe to survive. He makes me think of Joan Watson, though it's not clear yet whether he is as smart as her. He seems to balance her and is a friend, which Jane needs badly. He also puts up with her crape like Joan does with Sherlock.
| Bethanlovesoned 2/23/13 . chapter 12
you have to update! really need some more! it would be cool if there were some cute Sherlock and Watson moments! not nessicerally romantic though! and some cute moments with jane and sherlock ! :D
| Guest 1/14/13 . chapter 9
Why go to the trouble of writing a good story and then leave out parts because you don't feel like finding out what would be done in a certain situation. Completely ruined the chapter for me...
| Jen4850 1/14/13 . chapter 12
I liek bluegrass msuic but nto all of it.
Anyway I think you did a good job with serhlock in this chapter. Joan was believably torn about what to do.
| Jen4850 12/28/12 . chapter 11
Her online story sounds good too.
| Bethanlovesoned 12/28/12 . chapter 11
great new chapter! but I do think Sherlock and Jane need to have a happy reunion soon! :)))))))
| sam 12/21/12 . chapter 10
Can we see some fatherly cuteness between sherlock and his dad? Btw love yoyr story :)
| Oc 12/21/12 . chapter 10
Just kidding :) I really like your story, keep writing ! I hop the next chapter will be soon on the site :)
| TheNarrator24 12/20/12 . chapter 10
This is such a good review how could I have missed it. I think that Joe is a good guy for jane.
| Jen4850 12/20/12 . chapter 10
Joe is good. I mean we just met him recently in the story but that was a very cute meet. He had a good idea for Jane's anger and he's smart enough to hit the ground and help her keep safe too. Also I thought he was actually pretty brave to put up with her abruptness at first.
| Jen4850 12/17/12 . chapter 9
I'm glad he's awake.
| Jen4850 12/13/12 . chapter 8
I can neither spell or type well, embarassing when I worked in a library. So don't worry I just wanted to be sure I wasn't missing something.
Excellent cliffhanger here.
| PhoenixGrifyndor 12/12/12 . chapter 8
Thanks for the shout out! I think the guilt is going to start eating away at this girl. Obviously Sherlock and she have a lot to work out.