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| Reviews for The first perfect Arrancar |
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   x5rage 4/23/13 . chapter 5Whoa this story is a nice refresh. I like the chibi arranccar angle, more please :-) |
| Starter 4/20/13 . chapter 5 Good story and plot, perhaps you could put in one of the future chapter what Ichigo is based on Urahara's hypothesis |
| ajwa 3/29/13 . chapter 5 update soon please! ;) |
| S.R.457 3/13/13 . chapter 5 10/10 |
| the unknown man 2/22/13 . chapter 5 ichigo should end up with tatsuki for multiple reasons. first off their childhood friends and havent drifted apart this time. second as a more selfreason i have almost never found a good ichitats story. ithird if rukia and ichigo get toghether there is no way byakuya would approve without being ooc. |
| Zaralann 1/13/13 . chapter 5 Nice! |
| Damaio The End 12/29/12 . chapter 4 This is a good story update soon |
| mellra 12/16/12 . chapter 4 Out of curiosity, doesn't Ichigo have high-speed regeneration, so wouldn't all wounds heal fairly fast? As far as pairings go, I'ld make it IchiRuki because I feel Ichigo and Tatsuki have too much of a friendly rival thing going that trying to persue a romantic interest with each other would be weird, plus there is no canon foundation for that pairing. |
| mellra 12/16/12 . chapter 2 I honestly think that you should hold off on giving Tatsuki any powers, at least until it is revealed in the manga what her powers might be. Since it looks like she's training under Yoruichi, maybe give her a similar combat style, but try not to over power her. That's my thoughts on the subject anyway, but its your story, so just keep it awsome! |
| mellra 12/15/12 . chapter 5 This is a really good story! I hope to see more chapters in the near future. Also, is this going to be an Ichigo/Tatsuki pairing? Also, I'm guessing from this chapter that your making Tatsuki Yoruichi's apprentince and have her learn a similar fighting style. Try not to overpower her though! I'm guessing Chad's going to be added into the group next chapter, but is Orohime going to join as well? Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| jabbarulez 12/1/12 . chapter 5 i love Ms Ochi! she so blunt speaking whatever comes to mind! |
| Hartanna 11/26/12 . chapter 5 This is actually pretty freaking fantastic! I've never read something like this. You've definitely put an interesting spin on Bleach! Please please update soon! |
| Guest 11/25/12 . chapter 5 interesting. please update soon. |
| YellowWomanontheBrink 11/22/12 . chapter 1 Great story, but you need to specify when the timeskip occurs. I enjoyed reading! Hope you have good luck writing in the future! |
| Sharps19 11/17/12 . chapter 5 Great story. A, in my opinion, nice twist to Bleach |
