|Reviews for XOVER-ADVENTURES OF DEN-O IN DRAGON KNIGHT WORLD|
| dearlordmyeyes 12/6/12 . chapter 2
dear god. so. f***ing. painful.
| Retarded Chalice 11/16/12 . chapter 3
Pretty dang good! Keep goin'!
| Guest 11/8/12 . chapter 1
its good but it needs more words in a chapter i can understand you are new but its well
| xXScream4Xx 11/4/12 . chapter 1
Well, not bad.
Just please don't write the story in bold letters because it makes it harder to read (not that I have a problem with it I just thought I would tell you before someone else less nice tells you about it), and I think you meant Kotoro not Kyotaro.
But other than that I think you did a great job for your first fic (believe me, when I first started I was horrible, but I got better and better and I still am getting better).
Good luck with your next chapter and keep up the good work.