Uhh...you do know that her first name is Padme, not Amidala, right?

Other than that, you have a well-rounded story that is both interesting it makes you want to read more.

Good job, and I loved the story.
~Aubrey

hey great chapter i hope leia and luke and vader stop jade from killing both leia and luke and vader or anakin wife from getting kill update soon great chapter

10+

great story

One of the best Star Wars time travel stories I've read!!

I am just reviewing this chapter because apparently I had forgotten to do so before as I was reading this story. I believe that you should have as many reviews as possible for this story and I am just trying to do my part. By the by, I loved Jakked's character.

Now that is an ending! This truly is one of the best time travel fictions that I have had the honour and pleasure of reading. Now on to the sequel!

I loved the ending with C-3PO and Anakin. Great chapter!

No! You killed Mara Jade. This is not what I wanted to have happen. Other than that, it was again an amazing chapter.

Yes! Anakin has come back to the light side!

Ah, I love Padme. She is just so resilient and tough. I just wish Ani would work his way out of the dark side.

I love you especially long chapters. I'm glad that Padme is once again speaking with Obi-Wan, although her decision is extremely hard and heartbreaking. I wonder why you always refer to her as Amidala and not as Padme? The difference of view b/w Luke and Leia regarding their father is very true to canon. I'm glad that despite their differences they are working in tandem. Regarding Ki-Adi-Mundi and his daughter, I have to say I felt a bit annoyed by Sylvan. She assumed more and understood little. Ki-Adi-Mundi was pretty much correct, and after all he is only warning her, not forbidding her. There is a difference. Great work on this chapter as well.

Man, I can honestly say that I am impressed by Vader. Now this is the kind of Vader stories that I like to read. Excellent work!

Good chapter. This is the first time travel fic that I'm reading and I like it!

Kick ** plot!
Now the sad thing is that none of that happened but this is the best fanfic ive ever read.