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| twisterblake 2007-12-09 ch 2,  | abusehey great chapter i hope leia and luke and vader stop jade from killing both leia and luke and vader or anakin wife from getting kill update soon great chapter |
| BabaBiP 2006-10-03 ch 9, | abuse10+ |
| Tzarista 2006-09-29 ch 9, | abusegreat story |
| Sapre Kench 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseOne of the best Star Wars time travel stories I've read!! |
| calsax 2006-04-26 ch 3, | abuseI am just reviewing this chapter because apparently I had forgotten to do so before as I was reading this story. I believe that you should have as many reviews as possible for this story and I am just trying to do my part. By the by, I loved Jakked's character. |
| calsax 2006-04-26 ch 9, | abuseNow that is an ending! This truly is one of the best time travel fictions that I have had the honour and pleasure of reading. Now on to the sequel! |
| calsax 2006-04-26 ch 8, | abuseI loved the ending with C-3PO and Anakin. Great chapter! |
| calsax 2006-04-26 ch 7, | abuseNo! You killed Mara Jade. This is not what I wanted to have happen. Other than that, it was again an amazing chapter. |
| calsax 2006-04-26 ch 6, | abuseYes! Anakin has come back to the light side! |
| calsax 2006-04-26 ch 5, | abuseAh, I love Padme. She is just so resilient and tough. I just wish Ani would work his way out of the dark side. |
| calsax 2006-04-26 ch 4, | abuseI love you especially long chapters. I'm glad that Padme is once again speaking with Obi-Wan, although her decision is extremely hard and heartbreaking. I wonder why you always refer to her as Amidala and not as Padme? The difference of view b/w Luke and Leia regarding their father is very true to canon. I'm glad that despite their differences they are working in tandem. Regarding Ki-Adi-Mundi and his daughter, I have to say I felt a bit annoyed by Sylvan. She assumed more and understood little. Ki-Adi-Mundi was pretty much correct, and after all he is only warning her, not forbidding her. There is a difference. Great work on this chapter as well. |
| calsax 2006-04-25 ch 2, | abuseMan, I can honestly say that I am impressed by Vader. Now this is the kind of Vader stories that I like to read. Excellent work! |
| calsax 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseGood chapter. This is the first time travel fic that I'm reading and I like it! |
| mike 2005-12-09 ch 9, anon. | abuseKick ** plot! Now the sad thing is that none of that happened but this is the best fanfic ive ever read. |
| mike 2005-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abusetime travel is **, but the rest of the insight in the characters is good. |