I love it. I wish this had actually happened in the show.

That was surprising and funny. I enjoyed it a lot, keep it up! :)

My two favorite parts were Eun Soo telling Choi Young that she would take his breath away, not give it to him, and when Choi Young threatened his fellow Woodalchi. Classic moments. XD

Be careful of your past tense usage. Otherwise, enjoyable short story :)

Oh Dae-Man and Deok Man must not value their life xD In any case, love this story and couple! I'm actually in the process of writing a Faith fanfic myself (Once I work out the kinks) because I hate how there's so few of these DX.