Very good, thanks a lot for sharing! Please write more! Merry Christmas!

I loved it. I could feel Doyle's panic and Bodie's concern. Beautifully written.

Lovely to have a new writer to the site. Liked this. Its well written and would easily fit into the full story of the episode. Hope to read more from you. Diolch!

Welcome to Pros. A good first story. I look forward to more.