|Reviews for Day by Day|
| Gold.Glitter.Black.Mascara 6/8/13 . chapter 8
You wrote Jesse really well, you should continue
| Alex 2/23/13 . chapter 8
Welcome back, I've missed you!
| 2400shadow 2/2/13 . chapter 7
Update this please. I love this story, and you capture the characters well, especially Jesse's interactions with Mike and Walt. Good job and keep up the good work.
| DiamondTopaz 12/22/12 . chapter 7
Just wondering, how much meth did Jesse have in his house that he was able to give some to Badger but keep the rest?
| Agnez 12/21/12 . chapter 7
Wow! It's like I be watching BB write now. You are a great author. Can't wait for next chapter.
| writewithyoursoul 12/12/12 . chapter 1
I absolutely love the dialogue. I feel as though you have captured the characters personalities and I do not feel that the dialogue is repetitive what-so-ever. This is so wonderful and I hope to see more!
| DiamondTopaz 12/12/12 . chapter 6
Oh, no. I hope Gus doesn't track Badger down. That couldn't end well.
On a completely unrelated side note, have you noticed that most folks who leave bad reviews don't bother logging in to do it? That's because they don't want to give you an opportunity to speak for your work. Meaning, they don't value your opinion. So, you shouldn't value theirs.
| tyreese 12/12/12 . chapter 1
I would love to read a new Bb fic but can't force myself to get through the plodding dialogue or OOCness. It feels nothing like the show.
| glow vomit 12/3/12 . chapter 6
i love this story. the conversations go on for a long time but they are indulgently beautiful so i never get tired of reading them. i love the way you portray jesse, like this nervous ball of negative energy, it's like spot-on. i also love how you write his relationship with walter, and how jesse gets himself in more and more trouble by talking and rambling and doing what he does. and i love the way you write mike. it's all perfect and i'll be excited for your next update.
| Agnez 12/3/12 . chapter 6
Interesting so far. Wonder what will be next.
| M. Jade 12/1/12 . chapter 6
Nice chapter! Really getting excited for where this might go. As always, I think you really have their relationship dynamic down pat. Hope to see more soon!
| DiamondTopaz 11/17/12 . chapter 5
XD Always nice to see Badger make an appearance. Breaking Bad needs characters like him to pop up once in awhile to keep it light and break up all the tense, dramatic moments. I love the show, but it could use a little more comic relief. Season 4 especially was wall-to-wall drama, and a couple more breathers in between would have helped the effect.
Gotta say, though, when Jesse gave him that meth, I was thinking "Uh-oh, Badger's gonna get in trouble with it." Assuming the DEA bust was on him, I guess I was right.
| Giselle 11/15/12 . chapter 4
the dialogue meanders a lot and while still managing to feel repetitive and doesn't reveal anything important. Tighten your storytelling, consider more carefully whether a section adds to the story or is just spinning wheels.
| Agnez 11/13/12 . chapter 4
This is awsome!
| DiamondTopaz 11/12/12 . chapter 4
You're doing a very good job of exploring Jesse's addiction troubles. With as much traumatic stuff as has happened to him in just one year, it's no wonder he has to get high to forget it all.
The conversation with Walt in the lab felt a little too long, though, and it kind of went in circles. Although, they're usually in there together for hours at a time, so if you meant to drag the conversation out intentionally just to show how a typical day sounds for them, that works too. Although it was pretty risky to talk about the stolen meth in front of the cameras and everything. I would have had them using more vague innuendos, like when Jesse told the NA support group he killed a "dog."
I am curious, is this meant to be more of a character study than an actual story? Because so far, the only thing that's happened that feels like a plot point is Walt finding the stolen meth. The rest has been mostly exploring what's going on in their heads. Which is fine, but I am eager to see if it's leading up to something.