Hahahaa! Awesome final chapter! Poor Dusty though.

So many great bits in this chapter! Wittle Wonny, Jinx crashing into a window and landing in a heap only for Dusty to trip over her, Dusty getting a water cooler in the face and then throwing it only for it to be empty by the time it hits its target, Snake Eyes feeling like chopped liver... I loved it.

Love this entire story, actually. The characters are great, and I don't mean just Storm Shadow. They're all wonderful.

Love it! I loved Snake Eyes's concern over Dusty (vowing to get him a heavier comforter), to siding with him about his reasons for jumping in as a pretend boyfriend, to the action scenes-which had a nice addition of humor in it.

Oh, I LIKE this. Dusty does seem to be getting hit a lot in the face . . . that's what he gets for being the one normal guy on a mission with two scary ninja, though.

The moment with the safety glass was just brilliant! I love the way you handle the action scenes-intense, but avoiding the standard cliches. Jinx is all over the place like the Rabbit of Caerbannog, and poor Dusty is just trying to keep up. And Snake, of course, is still in the chaperone role.

"Ronnie" . . . oh lord. I made several undignified snorting noises, to say the least.

Awesome chapter! Poor Dusty, he just can't seem to catch a break...

I wonder what set off the security though.

I laugh every time I read this. Seriously.

I absolutely love this scene. Poor Dusty hiding in the fern. And Storm pouring on the self loathing to try and win him over... with Snake Eyes rolling his eyes. Love it.

hahahahahahahaha stormshadow playing overprotective father, dusty the teenager, and stormshadow the honorary brother/crazy weird sense of humor uncle lol

Dusty's reaction was a bit over the top but it was so hilarious I enjoyed it. Especially when he found out about Kimi and Tommy being related. Personally, I'd be terrified of a ninja who was family to the girl I'd been making eyes at. Angry family is scary enough, and ninja make everything more. Until next time.

Ok, Snakes and Storm just replaced Sarge and Flint as my favorite couple( for bantering I mean, Sarge put down the K-Bar!). I almost died laughing, that would've spoilt my Sunday morning.

Maverick

P.S:Even though I'm not a slash fan if Flint and Sarge got together Jaye and Courtney would be single, hmm this has potential..

PPS: Watched Tomorrow Never Dies again, kick-started my muse for that Kamakura Jinx handcuff fic. Just have to make it through my semester exams next week. Michelle Yeoh would make a great Jinx or Lucy Liu or Grace Park, Kamakura- Colin Firth or Matthew McC or Jeremy Renner (I mean he's already got archery down!)

.YET! Laughed my butt off :D

Too lazy to login, but I love the chapter. The image of a terrified Dusty babbling and hiding behind a fern is adorable. Also love Stormy's glib tongue.

Can't seem to sign in for some reason, soooo . . .

Poor Dusty. And you wonder why Annie is afraid of ninja? They COULD kill you with a fern if they wanted to. Stupid mystic warriors.

This chapter made me lol! Especially Storm putting on the woe-is-me to try and make Dusty sympathize with him, or at least stop hiding. If Dusty ever finds out that Storm was messing with him, though, Mr. Phoenix Master better hope he never has to go on any kind of desert mission. :D

Love the fight between Snake, Dusty, and Jinx-especially the latter two. Poor Snake must feel like he's a chaperone on a high-school field trip.

Hahahahaah! These entire chapter is just too good! I really love the interaction between everyone and Dusty's freak outs.

Oh my... Dusty is going to get it worse from his team mates than he did from Cobra, I think. And it could have worked, too.

Kimi really amuses me. Jinx is really good at the undercover stuff. :D

Aww, poor Dusty! I wonder who will be more mad at him, Snake or Jinx. Can't wait to find out. :)