amazing continuation of Nerys' adventures... I love the mystery and its slow unfolding. Can't wait for the last one.

oh well this is one very good chapter. Many things happen all at once. It sounds lie the time of river song's wedding. I gather u were inspired from it. Anyway the mystery unfolds. I'm sorry to hear the next chapter is the last. Good story. Can't for the end.

i did not expect Nerys to be this direct with Picard but that was cool. And Tucker, he seems part of a puzzle too.

oh man what a chapter. Full of exciting elements.

Aha, the Borg have come to collect their price but it is too much of a mouthful even for them...ha ha ha ha... curious to see how this goes.

what? a new threat lurking around? I'm geeking right now. Who can it be?

Ha chief O'Brien. You're bringing them one by one. Who's next - Benjamin?

what is the Kardassian up to lately?

now Odo was a nice surprise.

cool chapter. I liked the garden planet cool place

so Jane is almost like Jadzia - intriguing

sending herself a message man that's cheating and the spitting image of Jadzia - nice

there are a few mistakes here and there most notably nerris while instead it should be nerys. anyway good chapter

interesting beginning

wow. That was one heck of a battle and revelations. Update soon can't wait to see how it goes.