| Reviews for Welcome to Saginaw |
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evilwizardglick 12/8/12 . chapter 11This is a great story! I really think you should write a sequel! I'd love to read stories about the Monkees and Robert! |
little miss buntwell 12/4/12 . chapter 11Beautiful story! I loved it the first time I read it. :) Wonderfully written song story. Hope you post more. |
PlushChrome 11/28/12 . chapter 11Sad, beautifully written, very sweet, but, as I said before, so very sad. That's all I can say on this story, I really can't think of anything else to say, or any better way to word it. Thanks you for sharing this story with us. |
MonkeeMidgie 11/20/12 . chapter 11okay...just wow. You had me sobbing all heart-wrenching but beautifully done chapter |
Guest 11/20/12 . chapter 11 Just when I thought everything was going to be perfect... |
Guest 11/17/12 . chapter 10 Oh God no... |
MonkeeMidgie 11/16/12 . chapter 10NOOOOO! She has to be okay. Don't let the evil monster dad win! |
Farfisa68 11/15/12 . chapter 9Arrrgggh! Will Kayla really be able to escape her father? Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one! |
Guest 11/15/12 . chapter 9 I hope little Robert comes to the Monkee Pad! |
MonkeeMidgie 11/14/12 . chapter 8YAY! Now to get them out of there without alerting the evil father. I'm so glad she saw reason. |
Farfisa68 11/10/12 . chapter 6Great chapter! I was thrown, but enjoyed Mike's visit with Kayla not being what I expected. I felt some gut wrenching and heart breaking. Now Mike's meet up Kayla's & $ father, I am doing some nail biting too! |
Farfisa68 11/10/12 . chapter 2Really enjoying your story so far. Prologue just about broke my heart. The Monkee banter in chapter 2 has cheered me back up- for now as there must be more gut wrenching heartbreak to come, yes? ;-) Loved the bit about Mike teaching Peter sarcasm. Too cute! I can relate as I learned sarcasm watching the show when I was growing up. Mike is a good teacher LOL I could really envision each of them saying their dialog like on the show. Well done! Can't wait to read more! |
MonkeeMidgie 11/9/12 . chapter 5Oh man. No wonder he didn't go back. But can't they just load up Kayla and Robert and take them with them now? |
MonkeeMidgie 11/6/12 . chapter 3Oh wow. Guess it's time to tell the other's about her and his son now, huh? I can't wait to read more. Please keep going. |
Javanyet 11/5/12 . chapter 2I always thought this song deserved a story. Nice start, good backstory scenario. Please double check your spelling, things like "three years younger then", when it should be "than". Also nice characterizations and OC's. |