I still like this story btw I was formerly reviewing as Samaholic

this as usuall had me swollowing laughter all the way through!

ROFLOL! you should write a story about april fools day!

LOL

Loved it.

The story was funny-great idea-and could have been quite good except for the lack of punctuation marks and quotation marks to indicate what is being said by whom as well as a few incomplete sentences.

The idea was nice, but I stopped reading when Spike first spoke, you didn't use any "" so it was difficult to read what was actually said and wasn't.

So that would make this, for instance:

"Hey Sam" Spike greeted him. "Looks like we're the only ones they're still waiting for." Spike said stripping out of his street clothes and into his uniform.

"Yah better get going." Sam said, quietly getting up and walking away.

It would really be much easier to read.

Nice chapter ,poor Sam x