It was short but write more things like this!

I really did like it! But I wish u did like paige and everyone's reaction to them not moving but it was good!

wow surprise ending awesome

Although the ending was rushed, I still thought it was amazing! When Chloe got amnesia, I actually felt upset, so great job making the reader feel emotion!

i like it ut it chould have been a lot longer and it should have been paige that fell and they decied not to move beacuse of it make more plz

This isn't the dance moms category. Dance Academy is an Australian show about those who are serious dancers, unlike those from competition studios.

It's good, but it needs to be a BIT longer! And Clara can't exactly say "what" yet either, however it is cute for you to add her in. Clara also can't really be like "wow", but other than my critiques (which were small) it's actually pretty good!

This is the Dance ACADEMY fandom. Dance Academy is an Australian soap opera about the Nation Academy Of Dance, with Tara Webster being the main character. Didn't the fact that we're talking about Christian Reed (Who, might I say, is actractive(:) Sammy Leiberman and Tara Webster not tip you off your in the wrong fandom...?(:

This is in the wrong show category...

I like the concept, but you could explain why they were moving and also why Christi decided to stay in the end. Also, the characters could use some work. They weren't true to the way they're portrayed on Dance Moms at all. Chloe doesn't hate Maddie, and Maddie's not evil. Overall, it was pretty good for your first fanfic.