|Reviews for Animagus Mishap!|
| ForSer 5/16/13 . chapter 28
"Blaise finally said, "Fine, if you need to know the problem is HARRY BLOODY POTTER! He's the problem, for some fucked up reason I'm beginning to have feelings for him, the same feelings that I have for women and I don't fucking know why."
Don't do it please. I like this story too much :)
| ChaosOfRedFullMoon 5/15/13 . chapter 28
Ohh, this is promising! Can't wait to see the next chapter! (would be funny to see Harry calling on to Medusa to shut the whole lot up, or ask Luna to use her basilisk form...)
| ChaosOfRedFullMoon 5/15/13 . chapter 27
Ouch! Harry is now one of the more powerful wizards in Britain,he is insanely rich and politically powerful! Let's see the next chapter right away!
| ChaosOfRedFullMoon 5/15/13 . chapter 16
Good chapter! Hell, Dumbie won't know what hit him when Harry'll act! With two basilisks against him, the results will be interesting!
| Wrandral 5/14/13 . chapter 28
Ok so i must say i few things there because it's really needed .
Fist : You just can't manage to not write awesome fanfictions don't you ? Really feeling your passion for Dark Harry there
Second : Seriously with this one and vulcan i don't know anymore which i wish updated the most.
Third : Scratch Point 2 it's this fanfiction ... what did you do to Blaise ? It's killing me not knowing ARGHHHH!
Fourth: i don't know what's really expected of a Beta-Reader apart from proofreading but if you need one know that you can ask me anytime if i can help you.
Seriously though it's really funny taking this story and Vulcan to compare it with the ben 1à crossover you're writing at the moment . I mean in your new story Harry doesn't seem dark ( as much as in the 2 others) though it may just be because you just began with it and the event pushing him toward a more neutral view of the world is still down the road ?
Anyway favorited this story and you
| Zgogery 5/12/13 . chapter 28
THIS CONTAINS AN OMAKE
This has got to be one of the a smuttiest, funniest, and bestiality-iest fics I have ever read, and I've read hundreds of fics.
So, my overall point being, what do you ask?
The point is . . .
CONTINUE THE DAMN STORY OR I WILL NEVER READ ONE OF YOUR FICS EVER AGAIN!
Just kidding! If I swore off your fics, I would go insane(er) and get into a fanfiction withdrawal (again)
Awesome work dude! A word of advice to a fellow author though, and this is OPTIONAL!? So don't spazz out, try and stop some of your words from getting stick together. It reminds me of the artwork my 5 year old little brother makes (no offense)
Also. PRESENTING MY OMAKE!
(And prediction of the fic's possible future)
Slytherin dorm room, Blaise's room
Blaise had just finished "working off some steam" while thinking of a certain black haired wizard, and was changing into his nightclothes. He glanced up at the mirror, and caught a glimpse of luscious black hair and shapely legs, and gasped. The image flickered away, a trick of the light, as Blaise looked around.
"H-Hello? Is anyone here?" He said, pivoting on his heel when he heard a voice from the direction he was just looking. He stared, wide eyes, as his reflection grinned at him. "Well! Look who finally noticed the dude peeving on them in their room!" His reflection stated, a haughty grin grew on his doppelgängers face. Blaise stepped back in shock, about to head for the door, when the reflection sighed. Look, just sit. We need to talk." He sat down, his attention fixed in the mirror, as his reflection imitated his actions, but sat onto a plush armchair in the corner of the room. "Now, Blaise, I'm a representation of your subconscious, trying to get out! To make a long story rather short, uneventful, and bland, When we were a baby, our father switched our gender to get the male heir he wanted. He never even thought of us, or mother, before she died. I'm all that's left of the old us, and even that is being stolen from us. Our father caught us acting less assertive than he would have likes, and has tricked us into Sri king potions to inhibit, and eventually destroy, me.
He seems to hate anything involving your childhood, or as a baby, and now you know why. Perhaps this could also explain your latest piece of eye candy?" His reflection finished, a flirty and belittling tone in his voice, were it possible. "Personally, I want to run up to Gryffindor tower, and fuck a certain green eyed individual silly!" Blaise was taken aback at the confession, but stayed silent Ashli's duplicate ranted on and on. Finally, Blaise #2 sighed, looking up. "Well, I've just about water all the time we have! Well, see you soon, me! Bye" Blaise looked at his reflection oddly , opening his mouth to question, and comment on the statement, when Blaise's world went dark. He woke with a start in his dorm, and glanced around. No crazy mirror doppelgängers, and he wasn't thinking about Harry. 'What an odd dream' Blaise thought, getting his robes for the day laid out.
END OF OMAKE
I may send a few more. Not sues yet.
| Zabyne 5/10/13 . chapter 28
This is a very interesting story. It's nice to know your still writing though, I had assumed this story was dead until I saw a new update. As for what to do next... Su Li would be my suggestion, as you have eluded to something going on there. I've noticed a trend up so far. Two Centaurs for the Unicorn. Two Cats for the kneazle, and Luna/Medusa for Human (Kinda). Dunno if this was intentional, but it is awfully neat and clean :)
Su Li, being oriental, strong ties to Dragons, first task dragons. I understand you need a filler chapter or two to show the passing of time between now and the first task, so maybe Daphnes Lessons beginning, Bringing in the Unicorn herd, and Harry whalloping Draco, just cause I like seeing Draco get whalloped.
Seriously though, the plot seems relatively Linear to me from here, but God is in the details as they say. Did I really just used God in a description involving this story? Yup Imma burnin in hell for that probly.
I know how Writers block is, trust me I'm in the same boat. You have a million plotlines you can explore from here. Humanimagus (I should trademark that) potions for Centaurs/Hedwig. Daphnes Lessons. Daphne IS a slytherin after all, and frankly I was very much expecting her to make the connection when she looked into Harry's wolfs eyes. Maybe have her recognize Harry first before he is ready to approach her. Have them in the Library and she has a Eureka moment and starts cussing him for 'what he did to toria' or some such ending up in him Dominating her human to human in the stacks.
Anyway, thanks for the update and I hope to see more.
| Pokemon Master Razit 5/3/13 . chapter 1
| No. Just-Just. Just No 5/1/13 . chapter 28
I love this story! It is amazing and it feels like you have really thought about what is happening and what going to happen. but there is one thing I thought of reading this chapter is this television show "Dooms Day Prepers" it gave me a bit of a giggle. keep the grate work up. Love your story.
| O-Mega Lead 5/1/13 . chapter 28
Nice to see you back on and glad you are doing better. Last two chapters are understandable, but not quite like the rest of the series (a lot more o0o breaks, I've noticed, amungst other things. Still, I quite like the setup. As for ideas, I'd suggest starting to move the main story along. What I mean by that is the first few chapters are a lot of good startup action, adding people to the group, etc. I must also admit I'm quite a fan of bringing them in.
As to how to progress? Here's an idea list in no particular order:
Meet the other schools (for quidditch), spend time with Ginny, leading up to breaking her into being a pet who wants to be paraded around and be used publicly (unless you have another mindset for her to take), meet up with and get Susan to join with the group and further strengthen ties with Amelia politically, spend
A scene or two with Harry and the girls (I liked the Harry/Greengrass sections and wouldn't mind them in human form?), have the teaching sessions and have Harry reveal his identity to them (not have a repeat of Minerva-please), have Harry train hard on his dragon form so when the first task comes about (unless you are changing them from standard), he can have an effect on the dragon (good and it's docile, or bad and it's part of the 'bad' clan and Harry reveals some of his power-magical or animagus), have a quidditch match/meeting to pick teams and show the school shun both or some variation of tension, have Harry get Su Li to open up a bit and eventually have hear join Harry (as a pack member or follower). More possibly if you need it and ask. :)
| dracel10 4/25/13 . chapter 6
Sorry, can't be bothered to log on.
1. I think you should give Hedwig the human-animagus potion. Then proceed to do her. Not instantly though, but preferably in the same chapter.
2. Are you going to put slash and male pregnancy in this story? Please don't. I have nothing against homosexuality, it's just not for me. And don't even get me started om Mpreg. If something is unnatural, it's that. At least from a biological point of view.
| MMWillow13 4/25/13 . chapter 28
quite a power base he's creating, wonder if Blaise will be in his coven lol
| Guest 4/21/13 . chapter 28
Great chapter! Only part I'm not sure about is the whole Blaise scene...really hope there is no male/male in the story. That would just ruin it.
| dragonmam 4/21/13 . chapter 28
I thought of the idea of harry using his dragon form to dominate the dragon mother in the first task and then somehow acquiring her into his harem but then I felt like it now adding another Mary-sue like character into the story that pretty much feels like extra weight considering we have the lamia, two centaurs, possibly hedwig(was hinted in the storing previous chapters) who are pretty much blank slates for you to insert -female archetype here-.
Then came the problem of why should harry showthis awesome skill to everyone not close to him.
Then came the additional problem of too much pussy annd not enough harrys dick words in a chapter.
Tl:drive don't make first task dragon part of the harem pleawe
| shugokage 4/22/13 . chapter 28
Nice chapter and I can't wait to see where this story will go in the future!