I am loving this story. Sorry I havent commented before. This last chapter was so good. I hope you do at least one more (if not many, many more)

Just catching up with this... great stuff - am loving this!
Glad they've finally realised what they want!

THanks for posting... :)

why does it look familiar...hmmmm the dialogue about North Western resembles the one in "hurricanes and changes"...coincidence?

Great start, looking forward to more- when Will & Mac have a talk face to face. ;)

great!please please go on!

I'm REALLY enjoy this story! I wish he had done this on the show. Looking forward to reading more!