Hey Rookiegirl, I got a good snicker out of this story. I especially like a dense Pete not getting the jealous wife reaction to the waitress. I appreciate the lightheartedness of your story and the bond between Jim and Pete. Thanks for sharing!

I'm a little confused. I love your Pete and Jillian series, but maybe I'm stupid and don't see the point this story was trying to make. I guess Pete and Jillian had an argument? Jillian was jealous of the waitress hitting on Pete? I don't know. It's a cute story, but it's left me scratching my head in confusion at what the point of it was.

Nice story. You have indicated that this is a series. I will have to research the other stories and read them.

Nice work Rookiegirl! Loved it! I still would like to know how the big date went! LOL! Oh and what they had the second time around-boy or girl and what they named it!
You and Aussie oughta team up on a story sometime!