The story outline got my attention. BUT after looking at the bottom list, I balked at including Digimon into a "Super Robot" and "Real Robot" story. The hell? On another thing, why the C.B.'s created Zeon, deliberately? I figure that if you want to include Mobile Suit Gundam, you could have write down that the oppression of the A-Law (and possibly the extension of the Federation) led to the formation of Zeon. Or is it just your saying that the C.B.'s inadvertently led to the creation of Zeon and the One Year War, so there isn't any confusion on my part?

On your grammar, it does suck that you had already admitted. Not to be rude or anything but do you have a physical impairment? If someone could proofread your story it would sound better and appealing to us readers.

why is digimon in this?