Dear Yami no Paladin,

From what I see, this is like some sort of manga played out in fanfiction: three boys becoming Kamen Riders and a girl (our Audience surrogate) coming in for the wild ride. The question I'm wondering is how is the Rabbit Hatch (Rider Hatch, sorry) even there? It got destroyed at the finale of Fourze, right?

I'm also amazed that there's not a lot of talk about the original Kamen rider Club (like Gentaro's legacy and such) but that's fine. Fourze's story is over and it's time for new stars to shine. But there's a hint that Misaki is different (with that not running away comment showing up). I'm interested to see how you flesh out the characters.

Most of the terms fly over my head but that's mostly to me not knowing about Agito, Kabuto or Faiz at all. I'll one day get into those series (After I go through the second half of OOO and watch more of Double) though.

All in all, it's a beginning of an interesting story and I can't wait to see where this goes.

-Green Phantom Queen

Yosh! Finally had the time to read your latest chapter, bringing you a new review too! Alright, as expected, your story is nicely tailored and the pace relatively smooth.
Although there are points that throw me off like Misaki being captured. I expected her to struggle more because the setting you have given for her was rather weak (IMO of course) .
The fight between Blade and Jack could have been extended. I don't really feel the climax in that fight. A bit more struggle on Blade's side would be nice. Having more feelings imbued into it will allow us readers to feel more attached to the characters.
Other than that, really great chapter and its about time for me to publish my latest chapter of KR Zero ... Soon! Haha can't wait for your cameo of Den-O!

Good job
Could the mystery helper be Kenzaki the original Kamen Rider Blade?

Tarantula Undead, very friendly with humans.

Would the Undead be either Peacock, Caucasus or Mantis (Chalice?)

I really have to say this...
After reading all three chapters, I just feel that my work is a far cry from being a decent writing. You've managed to nail all the tension and spirits between the main cast and antagonist.
I have to be honest to say that before I have read your story, I was kinda against three different riders in another rider's element. But your writing really impressed me a lot. Details and description are at their finest, though there are a few words where you've left a letter out and also one or two words with the wrong tenses.
I can't think of anything wrong with your story right now, despite you saying that it's a weak chapter. I as a reader quite enjoyed it!
And finally, I thank you for putting this story up because as a fellow writer, I feel motivated to write even better now that I've seen the bar raised in front of me!
Can't wait to read your next chapter!

Well, a review it is. Seeing how much time and effort you have put into this story, the premise is really good.
A mixed rider world with elements from Fourze. Interesting and well written, though there are still a word or two that needs to be edited (tenses I mean)
Nice story really, I'm really looking forward to the future developments as well as the other riders!

I laughed at the part where Takuya was having a hard time trying to get himself a girlfriend. And to think a mysterious gun-wielding Rider shoots out to save him... and a splash of water? I have to say Kiva Bashaa might the one that helped him. Either way, a great chapter.

I think the mystery Rider is either Zolda or Kiva Bashaa form!

Wow, this story is great. And you're right, I got that 'feel' that you mentioned to me before in this story. It's similar to mine. Well, keep up the good work.

This seem promising. How many riders are going to be in the story?

Awesome, please work on it, please do.

This is a pretty good fanfic. Good Job!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I honestly didn't think I would like this story, but it comepletely blew me away! Keep up the good work!

Nice job so far. Can't wait to see the other riders. Would've been good if Fourze made an appearance since you mentioned him in your preview, but that's just me.