|Reviews for Makani|
| Runner043 1/23/13 . chapter 8
Little Brave Man... that's funny! Very good story.
| shirik40 12/15/12 . chapter 8
super great ending to another amzing adventure! thank you!
| Fifilla 12/8/12 . chapter 8
Sorry I didn't review earlier... loved the whole story and especially the ending :-)
I'm glad you decided to post it and I hope to read much more from you soon! :-)
| Craftygirl11 12/4/12 . chapter 8
I am glad that Steve got to see grace and that Danny and grace are okay and that Steve is okay, too. I loved the story as a whole. totally awesome.
| Elisciu 12/4/12 . chapter 8
Very good story here! I love the way Grace and Steve interacted in those hospital moments and I guess I could really see the guilt move away from Steve's shoulders!
I do hope you will write another story very soon.
| kunoichi 12/3/12 . chapter 8
great ending to a graet story.
| francis2 12/3/12 . chapter 8
I really enjoyed this story, thank you!
| maggiemcgarrett 12/3/12 . chapter 8
great story thanks for writing and sharing.
| Kilema 12/3/12 . chapter 8
Thanks for this fantastic story, sis.
| ClioUrania 11/28/12 . chapter 7
I think it's going to take both Danny AND Grace to get thru to Steve. If they can prove to him that, one; they don't blame him & two; that Grace isn't afraid of him; Steve will finally let go of the guilt & begin to truly heal. BTW, Grace hasn't really been mentioned after the rescue. I mean, her reaction to Steve will really be the catalyst for whether or not he recovers. Please update soon!
| Guest 11/27/12 . chapter 7
Awesome story! I can't wait to see how it ends!
| francis2 11/27/12 . chapter 7
Danny saved Steve again. Steve's guilt complex is really getting ridiculous, but he can't help it. Hope that he won't misunderstand being left alone again.
| antivol 11/26/12 . chapter 7
Great chapter! Like an emotional roller coaster! Thanks for sharing. antivol
| shirik40 11/26/12 . chapter 7
strong chapter that made me feel how hard times our guys are having
| J9yee 11/26/12 . chapter 7
Intense moments! Great great chapter!