| Reviews for Makani |
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Runner043 1/23/13 . chapter 8Little Brave Man... that's funny! Very good story. |
shirik40 12/15/12 . chapter 8super great ending to another amzing adventure! thank you! |
Fifilla 12/8/12 . chapter 8Sorry I didn't review earlier... loved the whole story and especially the ending :-) I'm glad you decided to post it and I hope to read much more from you soon! :-) |
Craftygirl11 12/4/12 . chapter 8I am glad that Steve got to see grace and that Danny and grace are okay and that Steve is okay, too. I loved the story as a whole. totally awesome. |
Elisciu 12/4/12 . chapter 8Very good story here! I love the way Grace and Steve interacted in those hospital moments and I guess I could really see the guilt move away from Steve's shoulders! I do hope you will write another story very soon. Thank you. |
kunoichi 12/3/12 . chapter 8great ending to a graet story. |
francis2 12/3/12 . chapter 8I really enjoyed this story, thank you! |
maggiemcgarrett 12/3/12 . chapter 8great story thanks for writing and sharing. |
Kilema 12/3/12 . chapter 8Thanks for this fantastic story, sis. |
ClioUrania 11/28/12 . chapter 7 I think it's going to take both Danny AND Grace to get thru to Steve. If they can prove to him that, one; they don't blame him & two; that Grace isn't afraid of him; Steve will finally let go of the guilt & begin to truly heal. BTW, Grace hasn't really been mentioned after the rescue. I mean, her reaction to Steve will really be the catalyst for whether or not he recovers. Please update soon! |
Guest 11/27/12 . chapter 7 Awesome story! I can't wait to see how it ends! |
francis2 11/27/12 . chapter 7Danny saved Steve again. Steve's guilt complex is really getting ridiculous, but he can't help it. Hope that he won't misunderstand being left alone again. |
antivol 11/26/12 . chapter 7 Great chapter! Like an emotional roller coaster! Thanks for sharing. antivol |
shirik40 11/26/12 . chapter 7strong chapter that made me feel how hard times our guys are having |
J9yee 11/26/12 . chapter 7Intense moments! Great great chapter! |