dammit. it wasnt shizuku that he was talking about... was it? im not sure anymore. but feitan and machi will do :P

is the person called "shinu" shizuku? awww. y did u kill her! she and feitan r awesome together :(

but i like feitan, so i will keep on reading :) keep on going with this awesome writing

lmao! ne, thankkies so much for writing about feitan! he's my fave character, you know! arigatou gozaimasu!

Tc always and GOD bless you!

;Dgyo

I can not see him cry. I'm mean he could deffinitly have some feeliong but Its immpossable for him to cry

Hello-

I'll clear it up for you; Feitan's Ryodon number is 7, lovely, is it not?

-WHOCARESABOUTANAME?

Shalnark... MY Shalnark, why did you make him die? So, is the story completed?

Rai: Reviewing my own work... How conceited.

Void: VERY.

Rai: In any case, much thanks to the people who reviewed! In fact, I think I'll post the rest of the story now!

Void: ...After THREE years, you crazy psycho!

Rai: To...

nick...Who said I was overdoing it?

Void: ... I did.

DP-san / Wusai: OH. MY. FREAKIN. FLYING. FUCK. WUSAI-SAMA! *Throws herself at her feet* I ADORE YOUR FEITAN FICS!

Void: ...Crazy fangirl...

chibigon: Arigato! -

ChibiYnM: He's *OUR* Feitan. ;3

Nora D: Phinx... I paired him up with PAKU! _V

nikki: Thank you thank you thank you! _

Void: ...Crazy psycho fangirl... _ ;

"can't imagine him on the verge of tears. I know that you're depicting a softer side for him in this fic, but you're quite overdoing it"

-overdoing ?

Everyone had the experience of crying, Feitan wont be spared. Is describing that sad experience/ the reason for it happening overdoing?

Ruthless ppl cry too, e.g Kuroro cried for Ubo.

What is not overdoing then, in your view? (not being rude, just want to know your view on that matter)

;_; Shalnark... dead?

FEITAN! .:squeal!:. But, um, I think the girl's Shizuku! 'Cause if there *has* to be a straight pairing, I say Machi goes to Hisoka-the-freaky-man-clown-guy-d00d! :333

And why *did* Kurapika spare Feitan? .:ultra spazz:.

Continue, j00!

Wusai

Oh that is a really cute fanfic of Feitan...

/me tackle hugs the poor bastard X3

Ahhh I haven't seen many Feitan fanficcys around so I was very happy to see one and a very good one at that

Noooo! Write the next chap fast! I wanna see what happens to my Feitan _ Mine... Bwahahahahhahaha

Oooh. I'm not sure which girl I want it to be. - Aww, you killed my Phinks-chan! I wanna know why Feitan didn't die toooo!

don't understand why no one is reviewing... this is a really good fic. you should continue it. it's rare to see any feitan fics around here. keep up the good work.