Not out if character for Danny at all. Good story! Liked the brotherly affection.

Good story.

Ooh. Great story!

For a moment there I thought jamie had died then I thought no you wouldn't do that danny must be having a nightmare, loved it anyway looking forward to more soon :)

I think that the way Danny acted is how he would if it happened for real. Good writing

I liked that! For a small second I really thought that you had killed Jamie (hangs head in shame) I felt as relieved as Danny when I realised that he was OK! Good job x