This story is good, I really like it. You're a talented writer. But being hispanic, I do have to say the Spanish is a bit incorrect, but its okay, because I can guess what you're trying to say.

I love your story! I didn't comment until now because I wanted to read all of it first. Please update soon!

Ahhhhhhh! This is soo different ((: awesome story3

Violet is such a stupid bitch!

really interesting so far, hope you continue this story !

I like the story so far, keep up the good work. My spanish is a little rusty, but some of the words in your story didn't sound right. I would look into that. Other than that good story so far. c:

Hola!
It's great to find a story where they speak spanish.
I'm from México and I love your fic 3
But... I don't know what kind of translator you use but some words aren't ok.

we don't said "usted" it's too formal. I think "usted" is used in Colombia to speak with normal people (like daugther and fathers, or friends or police) but in Spain and Latin America we use "tú".

And in the first chapter, I don't know what you try to said when you wrote on spanish.
Keep with this story is amazing ;D