As always I enjoyed this, please keep writing!

Okay. What's your secret?! How do you come up with so many good ideas?! You say you can't do the deep emotional stuff but you don't need to, this is clearly where you excel this from start to finish and am now off to read the follow up one. Well done!

I got my computer to read this to me while doing the ironing this afternoon. I was gripped from start to finish. An excellent and exciting story. Well done.