Very sweet.

This was such a sweet one shot!

You should continue this. Make it a part II, where they're at the pretzel place. :o)

I like this one too!

Cute and lighthearted. A simple depiction yet it begins to convey a deepening friendship based on something that Sherlock, perhaps, has never known.

Well written.

Especially like these few lines:

"It's elementary my dear Watson," he'd explained through a mouthful of marshmallows. "I observe and put two and two together you could do it too if you wanted to."

But she didn't. Sherlock had his methods, and she had her own.

this is really good and I hope that there will be more

I like this, u did good.

Aww, I liked this, it was cute! It seemed like something that would happen in the show. Keep up the great work!

The deductions were ingenious and very amusing. Loved those in particular. Good job on tracing the slow development of their relationship.

There are a few orthographic mistakes, but overall the story is sweet and fluffy :)

cute
mor peez

Again with the sugar rush. I like the marshmallows better than the cereal too! Love your style here. Sherlock is like a big goofy kid and it's cute. Great job!

The cereal bit is perfect.