|Reviews for Parks, Cereal and People Watching|
| Phosphorescent 1/18/13 . chapter 1
| ImaniSechelles 1/4/13 . chapter 1
This was such a sweet one shot!
| Ceu Praca 12/21/12 . chapter 1
You should continue this. Make it a part II, where they're at the pretzel place. :o)
| Anini mouse 11/16/12 . chapter 1
I like this one too!
| Ennui Enigma 11/13/12 . chapter 1
Cute and lighthearted. A simple depiction yet it begins to convey a deepening friendship based on something that Sherlock, perhaps, has never known.
Especially like these few lines:
"It's elementary my dear Watson," he'd explained through a mouthful of marshmallows. "I observe and put two and two together you could do it too if you wanted to."
But she didn't. Sherlock had his methods, and she had her own.
| Erksum 11/11/12 . chapter 1
this is really good and I hope that there will be more
| lily 11/11/12 . chapter 1
I like this, u did good.
| IntelligentWolf 11/11/12 . chapter 1
Aww, I liked this, it was cute! It seemed like something that would happen in the show. Keep up the great work!
| Dina C 11/7/12 . chapter 1
The deductions were ingenious and very amusing. Loved those in particular. Good job on tracing the slow development of their relationship.
| firstadream100 11/7/12 . chapter 1
There are a few orthographic mistakes, but overall the story is sweet and fluffy :)
| White Belt Writer 11/6/12 . chapter 1
| springfieldbluebird 11/6/12 . chapter 1
Again with the sugar rush. I like the marshmallows better than the cereal too! Love your style here. Sherlock is like a big goofy kid and it's cute. Great job!
| Jen4850 11/6/12 . chapter 1
The cereal bit is perfect.