I like your point of view in this, but you need to work on your punctuation and tenses.

really good, you captured the feelings very well

Wow this was really good, I loved it a lot! I hope you write more stories on Hannah and Dexter, please do! :D

This is a very interesting fan fiction to say the least, it seems almost believable but a little out there, good imagination though!

Your title, so very very true! I really love the two's dynamics, things will bound to keep getting more interesting from the last episode. Good story!