|Reviews for Home at 19|
| gretchen.mosier 1/3/13 . chapter 1
This is an excellent start to creating a new character - I am already intrigued, and want to know what the child's first day our of the asylum will be like... and how will she interact with all of the different people involved with the League? I'm thinking she may be someone that Nemo will relate to, but who knows?
The writing is beautifully executed - great word choices, each paragraph flows well, and the jump between the two characters' points of reference is smooth.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
| muse-in-waiting 11/12/12 . chapter 2
I like it so far. My only complaint is that Mina's maiden name is Murray.