Wow. That was truly incredible. In the story, we see Lindsay as this hard-ass who never really thinks too in-depth about anything; a wild-child if you will. But this shows just a sliver of vulnerability, which was great. Excellent job :)

:) This is nice! I really like stuffs written in Lindsay's pov because she's someone new. A fresh sight.
I like how you portrayed her in this piece.
I hope to see more of Lindsay!

That was incredibly sad, yet so beautiful. A great take on what happened to the friends after Sam passed.

A very believable - and very sad - take on the consequences of Sam's death on the other girls. Almost makes you feel sorry for Lindsay, in spite of her problems being mostly her own fault.
I especially liked the idea of Sam being the rock that kept them all together; it's something we don't really see in the book, since it's from Sam's perspective, but it probably would be something none of the girls realized until she was gone.