I love how you touched on what kind of physical and emotional pain Steve had to go through when he crashed into the ice. It's sad that the films haven't been able to adequately explain just how terrible it would be to experience all that first-hand.

I always imagined that he was dreaming, not unconscious. A perfect way to put it into writing! ca'nt wait to read more from you!

fearlee

Omg!
It's amazing
I love it
Great - amazing - work!