I certainly enjoyed it! And you were able to make it amazingly comprehensible, given what you had to work with. Thank you for writing this lovely fic!

Spooky scary, that song is so creepy. Luka's voice is perfect for scary songs, I think.

I always felt sorry for Duke Venomania. He just wanted to be loved, after all ;_;

Short, sweet, and to the point. I like it. One of the next ones needs to be a little longer though, to balance it out.

I like it.

I don't think that girl is really his daughter. It did call him his "daughter", at one point, didn't it?

Spooky, spooky.

Mothy's a little not right in the head, I think.