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Bucky
2008-01-01
ch 8,
abuseHow was it that, no matter how asinine the ideas, Son Goku always seemed to be successful while all of Piccolo's carefully laid out plans where thwarted and dismissed? Realizing that he had once again been nicely wrapped up to be towed away, Piccolo gave up. “Find me a car. Unlike other people, I can drive.”


Great way to end the chapter. So well put, too. This took a more serious turn, and I liked the conversation between the two of them. I like how Goku never takes his meanness seriously. hehe. It's so frustrating for Piccolo. :)

This was a joy to read, Lee. I hope all is well over there in Germany!
*hugs*

bucky
Bucky
2008-01-01
ch 7,
abuse"Piccolo tried to imitate the genuine Son puppy eyes and it seemed to work"

ha! What a visual!!

And I can just hear Goku's voice in Piccolo's ear as he's trying to coach him on how to flirt with the lady. Too too funny!!
Bucky
2008-01-01
ch 4,
abuseGood ole Lee, girl! How the heck are ya??

I haven't read fanfiction for years, but a really good friend of mine recently commented on finding this old fic about Piccolo and Goku driving. She said she laughed all the way through it. I had to find it, and when I did I was delighted to find that it was one of yours!!

This is hilarious!! Oh my word. It makes me want to watch those episodes all over. I love Piccolo's reactions in all these chapters. He's so in character, it's great. I laughed so hard when they called him Son Piccolo. And I laughed my butt off when Goku was all, "Piccolo doesn't have one either..." Their fear of Chi Chi is hilarious, and I like how well you write HER perspective, too. It's all wonderful. I'm glad you left this on here!!

The simulator scene was priceless. Poor poor Piccolo...
storm-of-insanity
2005-11-19
ch 8,
abusei hope this story gets back on the road (i thought of a pun hehehehehehehehehehehehe. i bet you don't get it -.-U)
it makes me sad to see such a great story discontinued but i suppose if you've lost all heart in writting this, theres no piont on trying to wake the dead. i mean i kinda lost interest in my fic and i left mine on a cliff hanger so discontinuing isn't that bad.

this fic was so funny. i couldn't stop grinning thoughout the whole thing.
Ko Neko
2005-04-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is a great fic ! Please, please, continue !!
kns
2004-03-02
ch 8, anon.
abusehehehe, this story keeps getting better and better! i love the blend of comedy and actual thought provoking stuff! please update soon!
sakura117us
2003-05-09
ch 8, anon.
abuseGood story! ^_^
Knight's Shadow
2003-04-19
ch 8, anon.
abuseReally good story.Please update soon.
Dreamwraith
2003-02-11
ch 8,
abuseWell, I suppose I can say that my roomie's going to kill me for laughing so hard. You're doing a good job on this one, and I keep comparing this one to "Lost". Quite different, I might add. Anyway, I'm waiting for the next chapter of this story!
PiccolosdragoN
2003-01-03
ch 8, anon.
abuseToooo good... just tooo good.. i love your attention to detail.. its fanfastic
Lost Book
2002-09-02
ch 7, anon.
abuseSorry I didn't reveiw sooner, good chapter! Keep up the good work. Lol :) go piccy and goku!
Anime-Goddess2
2002-08-17
ch 7,
abuse I feel all..special!

anyway! great chapter! The mental picture of Piccolo saying "please" to a woman..Haha!!! hehehe.very very good chapter, looking forward to the next one!
Piccolosdragon
2002-08-12
ch 7,
abuseReally good i can just imagine Piccolo doing a puppy dog eye expression and saying "Please"

Update soon
Anime-Goddess2
2002-08-10
ch 6,
abuseNO!! Please do continue! your a terrific writer!! Must have more!! Please continue!
your pathetic, get up!
..fine.. anyway I look forward to Part two! Bye!
AkiHisuiQON
2002-08-09
ch 6,
abuse^_^ ITS SOOO CUTE IT MAKES ME WANNA HUG HIM!
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