  anonymus 6/5/05 . chapter 1 IT WAS BROCK! Oh that jerk! What is Ash gonna do to him! OH please finish soon! |
 Mr.Evil 12/10/03 . chapter 1make another chatper this is getting good |
| the Iron Duke the Desert Fox 4/3/01 . chapter 1 DF:Don't stop. please write more. ID:keep up the good work. |
| Joy-girl 4/1/01 . chapter 1 That is so cool! PLEASE keep going! |
| Songbreeze 10/19/00 . chapter 1 This was really good! Please write some more soon!:) |
| Sailor Pokemon 10/7/00 . chapter 1 Ooooooo! So Brock was the kidnapper! |
| Blast Girl 10/6/00 . chapter 1 Hey that was a great story, but PLEASE write another chapter! |
| Legacy 10/6/00 . chapter 1 It's about time...good chapter though |
| smellslikechidna 10/6/00 . chapter 1 Finish, or feel the wrath of the Togepi. This is hooking (Izzat a real word?)! Pleeeeeaaaaaaase finish! _ Be nice! |
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