great ch hope for more

Hmm, this is pretty good. Since iv'e made the Dino Files, you've been using those to make up the behavior of certain dinosaurs. Guess my files did do a great job.

Anyway, great work, i'll look forward for more of it. Anyway, be seeing you ;)!

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Are you doing the POVs of several different species? Nice story.

Hope to see one of the baby reces fight blue row and have it be a draw

Welcome back :)

Wow! About time you've showed up! Nice chapter, though I seem to notice some grammer problems like I do, but you will get better overtime. You should sometimes see some O.C's of mine or Yoshi 2.1 if you want to use O.C's of us. Anyway, nice job indeed. You should check out on my stories overtime as well, got a new chap of A T. rex's Rule for you to read.

Anyway, keep it up :)!

I like how well this series of short stories describes the day to day problems on Isla Sora, and how the paths of the characters occasionally cross. I also like your description of the "jungle raptors" and their differences with the "plain raptors".

Keep it up :)

Nice one, I think you've inspired Dinosaur Planet along with me to make it, i'm impressed. The only complain is some spelling mistakes, but doesn't everybody suffer from that, so I forgive you for that.

Anyway, keep up the good work :)!

this story is awesome, keep it up

aw poor othnielia :(

Cool as always, I like this chapter a lot. Oh, & nice cover for the story & nice DP.

Keep up the good work :)!

Poor Jak! He was stuck in a chipbag! This is why you should not build theme parks of dinosaurs and then leave your chipbags! I'm willing to bet it was Nedry's.

I love this story! I'm going to follow it.