Nothing will cause a nightmare quicker than a guilty conscience and nothing will make you see the light quicker than a realistic nightmare. Good job.

Oh, if only this had happened. I love the court setting and Matt essentially putting himself on trial. He would have been found negligent for sure. I love him and even I couldn't vote for his innocence.

Wow! Finally someone got the facts right.

Singerme...YeeHaa!..Now THAT's a court hearing!..what a story and lovin' that ending! Talk about accountability! And the prosecutor is PERFECT! BRAVO! What a 100% pure fanfix rush!

Loved the trial aspect, even knowing it would be a dream. Good way to make some strong points.

singerme, you had me sitting on the edge of my Seat figuríng out what was happening in this story. It was just great and beatiful ending! Very unusual setting and main idea. I thought so many things, different scenarios, but didn't get it until I read it to the end! Magnificent! Keep the muse the Lord has given you. You are a blessed and gifted writter.

Nicely done. Loved the way you had Matt face the fact that their relationship was based on his job and what he wanted. What happen(s) to Kitty was his fault. Never taking in what he was doing was really affecting her and their relationship. Glad he finally got around to doing the proper thing. Took him long enough. Really enjoyed this.

Amazing piece of writing. I love it and especially that Matt woke up and realized how selfish he had been in his relationship to Kitty. Thanks.

Janie

HALLELUJAH!

Total originality! Fantastic writing! Romance! What more can a gunsmokegirl ask for?

xoxo,
lj

I love this! Not much more I can say than that. You are a writing machine :-)

This is definitely a unique approach - Matt's subconscious putting him on trial for his actions towards Kitty. Thanks for the story.

Elaine