|Reviews for Unexpected Visitor|
| Hazmatt 2/21/13 . chapter 1
Great story! I really enjoyed it!
| Tempe4Booth 12/8/12 . chapter 1
this is beautiful i wish they did this
| Lil 11/17/12 . chapter 1
This is such a great start to a story, I hope you plan to continue it. :)
| Lindsaylove15 11/7/12 . chapter 1
Great story! And beautiful explanation, it doesn't seem unrealistic, you did absolutely fantastic expecting to see more fanfiction from you ;)
| Megan Hunt 11/8/12 . chapter 1
I like the idea of the story, it isnt very realistic, but thats why we call it fanFICTION, right?! There were some little mistakes, but they dont matter that much. I am not that familiar with the comma rules in UK and USA, maybe their different, so I cant say anything about it, its just not how we in Germany would do it... Anyway, I hope my review was helpful to you it was really good for a first attempt!