Hey there Mysra,
That was a terrific story. Sorry I wasn't able to read it when you were writing it but this is an awsome read. I love the way you have John and Teyla able to feel each other and how they are now. Great job! Shellbean. P.S. Looking forward to reading Under Control.

Wow an lovely ending to a lovely chapter :)xxso cant wait for. The sequel :)xxtinnycsixx
Love your story

I liked the explanation for John and Teyla's telepathic bond. I really enjoyed your story. I am looking forward to the sequel.

oui je veux la suite

I also hope that you deal with the Pierce hearing during the sequel, make him find out what a idiot he was

HI,
just wanted to say I enjoyed your story...
and am looking forward to the next
hugs

This is a wonderful story and I am thrilled that there's a sequel on the horizon! thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Fantastic story! Thanks so much for sharing it with us! Can't wait for you to post the sequel...I will be waiting!

PS: I love that John feels complete and happy and at peace with himself.. No longer letting himself let his demons rule his life. John Sheppard is such a wonderful character..he deserves his own happiness for all he does for everyone else so selflessly.

Aw! Love that they've come full circle, standing on the balcony together again and this time as a family. If John could ever learn to let go of his demons and open up to someone, you know Teyla was the one. From the very beginning. You wrote a lovely story and I'm curious to see what happens to our favorite couple next. Great work, Mysra!

P.S. If you can't find anyone to beta for you, I'd be willing to give you a hand. My time is running pretty consistently short these days, but the offer's there. :)

Oh my gosh..I loved this story. It was great. Every chapter left me wanting more. So sad its over, but have saved it to read again at some point. Can't wait for another story from you...Congrats on a wonderful story.

great chapter and great ending thx caint wait to read more.

WONDERFUL end!

I wish I would be real clever in english to be a beta, but unfortunately, it's not my maternal language.

I was just wondering why the connection between John and Teyla cause the wraith/Iratus DNA now in his bloodstream, from my point of view, this is not really necessary between those two who obviously love each other enough without the held of this new bond.

But this is your fic :-)

I just cannot wait to read the sequel!

Excellent Story, portrayal of the characters and development of the Shep/Teyla/TJ dynamic. Always love to see them come together as a couple. Hope to see more from you soon.

Another great chapter I wonder how teyla John and TJ are in hawaii?lol for Rodney and jennifer:) I hope this isn't the last chapter;( great chap:)xxtinnycsixx

Aww really nice chapter I like how teyla can Sence when John is back:)great chap.
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