Really liked this took me a whilento read it though! Cant wait to read your other fanfics! :)

Just spent like 2 hours of my last day of the holidays reading this;) Btw Im not that much of a slow reader, I checked twitter after like every chapter:') This is really good and you should write more long ones, this has certainly made me laugh loadss and has had serious moments aswell3 Itsss reallllllyyy reallllly good, wellll doneeeeeeee xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx x

Oh lord, I thought things had calmed down abit :'D I actually love this story/fanfiction so much :'D

You put 'As he laid millie on the changing cover' Shouldn't that be Nina?:)xxx

Omg I could so imagine Zoe doing that, made me chuckle:)

Awh this chapter is reallllllyyyyy goooood ;D xxxx

Woah can they actually do that? :O

omg SIMON D':

"shut up you stupid old fart and give me a chance!" Omg loooooooool ;D I did not expect that ;D xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

OMG looool I am crying laughing at how much drama there is in this:') Awh supposeed to be doing art homework but this is so much more entertaining :'D :'D :'D xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Awh this has been the best chapter, I actually felt scared for them, cant wait to read the next onee :D xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xx

Omg loool this is sooo sooo good! :'D I laugh everytime something big happens because theres been like 15 big events so far omg hah but its really good welll donee!3 xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxx

Well this is extremely dramatic hehe :'D xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

biscuits not biscutes
tuna not tune
usually not usaly

you need to work on your spelling and typing skills but yeah good so far ...