Love the story and it is a great start to a series! I really hope you come back to it!

I love the title for this story. As a reader you can really feel Amanda being torn and dragged in different directions by the men in her life. Great portrayal of what a jerk father Joe can be... I always thought that aspect of the series was underdeveloped... Lee could be put into such a great light playing off Joes callousness. I can hardly wait for the next story in the series. Thank you.

I like the story concept. You have done a really good job. One suggestion though...when Lee finds out that Amanda is in the hospital, I can't help but think that he would have been more animated. This is HIS Amanda that has been hurt. I can't see how he could be so calm and matter-of-fact about this. I see him going ballistic and wanting to get to her as fast as possible with Billy running after him.

I can't believe no one has reviewed...great story...very true to characters...

Love the story! Can't wait to read the next one!

Really sweet story. I think more scene breaks would help with some confusion I had when new characters started to talk-but over all super well done.

Absolutely love this story. Great job!

awe, can't wait to here more from you. Excellent story!

I loved this story! I loved even more when I noted that you said it was to be the first in a series of stories. You keep on writing and I will keep on reading.

Wow! Each chapter seemed better than the last. I will revist this story again. I like all of your stories and think that you get better with each one. Well done.

Great chapter! Thanks!

yea! what a nice way to end it. Great job! Can't wait to read the next stories.

This was a great story.

can't wait for the next chapter(s). The story keeps getting up the great work.

that is another amazing chapter, will try to control myself as I wait for chapter five.