Ooh I like this. This is kind of what I'm going for with Joan and Sherlock in my head - could be friendship or could be romance, but either way full of emotion.

More please-?

-Sef

I have really enjoyed reading your work. You have a lovely way in how you convey your storyline and I look forward to reading more.

Thank you

This was very good.

Awwwwwww... the feels!

I'm really glad you decided to post this despite it not working in the main story. Nice work!

Mistflyer

a perfect little bit, thanks for sharing.

I loved her testing him with "Amygdala"! Too funny! I loved his t-shirt too. He's so anti-social but he's starting to let her in little by little.. Loved this little ficlet, great job! :)

Lovely and endearing scene. The T-shirt saying was hilarious. The juxtaposition of the humor amidst the poignancy and tension of the rest of the scene seemed really sophisticated to me. Well done!

Really liked this, both on its own and as a complement to your other story. :)

Very sweet.

Sherlock is there for Joan and he for her, which appears to be enough for them both. They each need the touch of the other-the feel of the other. Whether this is love or the acknowledgement of a friendship that may develope into love is yet to be determined.