|Reviews for Broken Bonds|
| White Stag Knight 5/15/13 . chapter 20
I wonder if there is fail safe, to the witch's spell on Ed that would turn him completely evil . . . hmmm what could Jadis be planning now. Well whatever it is is not going to be good for our heroes. So Edward is sort of remembering who is really is, that is always good, but knowing Jadis she is going to put some evil spin on it to keep him evil.
Question: I am having a hard time understanding who is Redian and I thought he was dead from launching that attack on the Jadis. Another question, I thought Edan had long white hair, but now he has short black, I am confused.
For your question of the day, Star Trek the Next Generation: Best of Both worlds soundtrack inspired many scenes in Like Father, Like Son, Like Hell. The song "First Attack" inspired last part of chapter 2 and most of the third.
Can't wait for the next installment : )
| narniagirl11 5/13/13 . chapter 20
Uh oh, Edan blurted out too much. He always was rather good at that, don't you think? I hope he doesn't betray his siblings! I'm glad that Lucy and Peter made it safely back, even though poor Mr. Tumnus was taken. Perhaps Edan will run into him. I was glad to see Susan too!
Oh, yes, I always listen to music while I write. So the most obvious song that influenced my writing was "The Words I Would Say" by Sidewalk Prophets, because I wrote an entire 10-chapter fanfic based off of that. Another song I used recently was "A Call to Arms" by 30 Seconds to Mars. It's a good song for writing about battles or calls to arms. ;) "This Is War" by the same band is also stirring.
| anniecarrots1 5/12/13 . chapter 20
I loved it so much ! I can't wait for more
| narniagirl11 5/9/13 . chapter 19
Oh! Did the wolf get Tumnus? Yikes! I'm glad that Lucy made it safely back though. Peter will look after her. Will we be seeing more of Susan any time soon?
I liked the beginning scene with Edan poking fun at Maugrim. Edan's going to be in trouble with Jadis.
I'm so glad that you updated. I've missed the story! Looking foward to your next update!
| anniecarrots1 5/8/13 . chapter 19
I loved it ! I'm glad your back too :) I can't wait for more
| Guest 4/25/13 . chapter 18
I love this story. Please update soon!:)
| xComeAlongPond 3/4/13 . chapter 18
I really liked this. Lucy was very much in character. Loved the moment with Oreius!
Thanks for updating!
| narniagirl11 3/4/13 . chapter 18
Aww, I liked that Lucy got to see Ed again. Glad that the first part worked out for you. The sword play in the second part was interesting. I hope that Peter doesn't get mad with Lu for wandering into the woods without telling any one. It is dangerous out there.
The first fanfic I ever wrote was, "Missing Pieces". And I wrote that LONG before I knew there was such a long as fanfictions or . It basically had no plot. It was just snippets of the Pevensies' lives before LWW. I still have it posted on here. That is one that I have never considered rewriting.
| anniecarrots1 3/3/13 . chapter 18
I loved it :) please update soon ;D
| narniagirl11 2/24/13 . chapter 17
Yay! Another chapter! I liked all the stuff with Peter. Can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next! :)
Yes, I have based many character traits for my OCs off my friends.
| anniecarrots1 2/22/13 . chapter 17
I really loved this chapter , it was perfection :) I can't wait to read more
| WillowDryad 2/3/13 . chapter 16
I enjoyed that. Eager to have Peter and Edmund meet again.
FF authors I admire? Elecktrum of course. Tonzura123. Lirenel. Man, too many to list. Lots of good ones. :)
| narniagirl11 2/3/13 . chapter 16
Yay! A new chapter! I simply adored Lucy and her sketching was perfect! Love how she drew Ed, but can't remember who is is! I liked this part: "perhaps he's from another kingdom: a suitor of Susan's. You know she'll have them eventually, no matter what you and Peter do to chase them away." Ha ha! So perfect. :) Can't wait for the next chapter.
Authors I admire: C. S. Lewis, J. R. R. Tolkien, G. A. Henty, and Sir H. Rider Haggard.
Fanfic authors: WillowDryad, Rose & Psyche, King Caspian the Seafarer, Lirenel.
| anniecarrots1 2/2/13 . chapter 16
Hmm I really like J.K. Rowling and C.S. Lewis . I enjoyed it as usual and I can't wait for another update :)
| narniagirl11 1/27/13 . chapter 15
I liked that we finally got to see how Susan is coping! I think that you did a very good job. :) And I liked the dream thing with Edan too, of course.
Hmm, my favorite OC probably is Newman from "Airplanes in the Night Sky" (Narnia) or my latest, Galen, "Born For This" (Narnia). My favorite canon character to write is Peter, but I enjoy Susan too because she is so complex.