I like your version much better than the canon version. Great job with this.

Stinky, Blinky, Pinky and the rest of the small town playground bullies really are a bunch of dirty dogs! This is a very action packed story, and another example of what happens to dirtbags who try and play chicken with Hardcase and McCormick. My favourite part was where Hardcastle reassured an injured McCormick that he would never arrest him. Well done. :)

I'm speechless! This is even better than the aired episode. You are such a good writer! I can't wait for another one!