| Reviews for In America |
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MuggleCreator 4/19/13 . chapter 1Awwww. So sweet. |
lemacd 3/2/13 . chapter 1"of the people in this bed..." brilliant. love your writing. hooked. |
summersunshine88 1/8/13 . chapter 1Perfect, and perfectly written. I've never seen someone keep the Captain so perfectly in character. He is a tough one and I am very picky about how he is written, especially. The dialogue is so clever and beautiful. Just amazing, from start to finish. Please write more Sound of Music stories because you are a breath of fresh air! |
scrubso 11/24/12 . chapter 1Great story. I really love how you captured the characters! |
toons27 11/11/12 . chapter 1Aww, I love this story! I like how the characters were true to how they were in the movie. It's also refreshing to read a story about them making safely to America WITHOUT some certain Nazis catching/kidnapping them. |
mquest 11/11/12 . chapter 1I did enjoy this story. I liked how true to the characters you were. The dialogue was wonderful. I really hope you write some more! |
augiesannie 11/10/12 . chapter 1I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED this story. Lines like "Well, it's the ocean, darling. It's more about what you feel than what you see." and "It is, my love, I'm sure of it, only it's not a vintage of defeat that I have never tasted." kept Georg in character, which very few authors do so well. The part about Agathe was masterful - I have always wondered how Maria made her peace with Agathe's memory and I like the way that Georg was so open to the conversation. I loved the whole silent question thing - very romantic. Hope your schoolwork went well and come back soon! |
jessica97 11/9/12 . chapter 1I loved this so much! Such a nice, sweet little story! |
espressogoddess 11/9/12 . chapter 1Now, that is sweet :) |
login password 11/8/12 . chapter 1I liked this story a lot. & I expecially enjoyed the Maria-Georg moments. :D |
pussycatwithattitude 11/8/12 . chapter 1Beyond perfect, and some of the best characterisation I have seen. I hope you will write more for this pairing in the future. |
Honkytonkangel 11/8/12 . chapter 1Totally loved it. They are so cute and perfect together. Loved their talk on the deck and the flashback of them talking about Agathe in Paris. It's cool that they can talk about everything. Lastly loved the little bit of romance in the cabin. |
missmillie13 11/8/12 . chapter 1What a beautiful story! Really, your writing is amazing and so truthful to the characters... I absolutely loved everything about it, specially the interaction between Maria and Georg :) You should write more stories for TSOM! Congratulations and keep writing! |
Bellarsam Chrisjulittle 11/8/12 . chapter 1What a lovely one-shot! You've captured the characters beautifully! |
jlbrk26 11/8/12 . chapter 1Love it please write more. |