A bit of an abrupt ending, it could have used a few more chapters, but it's such a great story. I can't wait to read the next one.

YES! I love reading about couples doing the Love Dare! What about even going back in time to when Mrs. Holt did it?

David tapped the book against his knee thoughtfully before handing it back to Caleb. "You know, I think that I'll take you up on that." ...Ohmygosh I'd love to see you do a 40 chapter story where David does the Love Dare to Amanda.

And it was then that she realized that she, Amanda Williams – soon to be Thomson – was falling in love with her fiancé. ...Wouldn't you be in love before getting engaged? This isn't the 1800s where people got married just for the sake of a good match and lived, in some case, a loveless marriage. That does nothing for Olivia.

This chapter was very good. The whole story and series so far has been very good. I'm looking forward to the next one.

Wow, the memories were suggestive. Created an interesting contrast between the then and the now, that's for sure!
In response to your PM, I'd say that /personally/, I would.

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"Oh," another eye roll from Kasey. "That sounds like the perfect honeymoon."
Poor Amanda. Way too much acting going on for one girl. Leave her alone, Kasey. Please?
Back on track. This was great.

The conversation between the gals seemed forced, but then it's not exactly a typical ex-roommate conversation either...
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I'm sorry about the criticism, it's just that this is exactly how I feel about this chapter. Not one of the best, but keep going.

Hmm. Don't these guys have anything to do except hug and pull back?
I like the poem, though. Cute.

"I have to come up with my master plan for the takeover, you know." Oh, David...

The Gavin-and-Layne one sounds interesting. Just so long as it's different enough from this one.

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Glad to see Amanda becoming more comfortable. She was getting me a little worried in the last chapter.
Baby steps? Absolutely. It's gonna work, I know.

Nice. Again, love the dog. Hesitation well played.
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Good ol' dog. I like him. Just decided.
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Great tension. Felt real.

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