|Reviews for Elements of Perfection|
| In Christ Alone 5/9/13 . chapter 1
The infamous In Christ Alone strikes again, failing to sign in for lack of energy.
Ah! i love this! You describe the scene wonderfully. And i love Sherlock's take-over of the support group. ;P
Will favorite if i remeber to later, when I'm signed in.
Have a great day!
| CharmingNotDarling 4/29/13 . chapter 1
God I absolutely loved this! Amazing!
| SiaSaySomeday 4/20/13 . chapter 1
It's fantastic writing;) I really liked it... I hope you'll update soon:D
| the-contradiction 4/5/13 . chapter 1
perfect, so in character I could actually imagine this happening on the show, you should definitely write more
| Guest 4/5/13 . chapter 1
Ahhhhhh suuuuuuper cute! XP
| BlueTigress 3/30/13 . chapter 1
great story! Love it! :D that could really happen! :p
| Thegirlwiththekey 3/28/13 . chapter 1
Your writing style is so eloquent!
| Guest 3/14/13 . chapter 1
Love this story :D is it a one shot ? Because I'd love to read more
| Captain Rilee 3/10/13 . chapter 1
Honey, this was fabulous. Sherlock commandeering an AA meeting for his deductive ramblings. SO. Spot. ON! Well done! All the little details about the participants. Sherlock's dialogue was superb! I can hear JLM's voice in my head. Brilliant. I loved the realization he has about her dreams and then "Ah yes, you have dreams. I wish to hear about them." SO LOVELY! I think...maybe, if you don't mind my saying, one little change I can recommend...?
"To me… you are the embodiment of perfection all the time."
Instead of "all the time" what about "at all times"
"All the time" sounds almost colloquial, and American-ish.
BUT MAN! I LOVED THIS FIC! It's so spot on. I want this to show up in the show! I applaud you! More Elementary fics? 3 PLEASE!
| TheBonesGirl33 2/8/13 . chapter 1
This was so great! :)
| Guest 1/13/13 . chapter 1
Hi did you watch the new episode " m " that episode scared the hell outta that poor guy m killed at the being i felt bad for and i'm glad that Sherlock showed up before m had a chance to kill that girl with the dog but who knew Sherlock could get that angry and i felt so bad for him when he was telling Joan about his beloved and he looked like he was gonna cry and that we know who really killed her things are going to get nasty
| Guest 1/10/13 . chapter 1
That was actually really really well written. You embodied Sherlock Holmes exactly and it was a lovely read. One of the best fanfictions I have ever read :)
| Viola Everseau 1/4/13 . chapter 1
Wow! I really enjoyed this. Sherlock was very "in character", the plot was very intriguing, you have great diction, the multitude of various other characters were enjoyable, and the ending was very sweet. The only mistake was that I thought Joan wasn't fully in character, but that's perfectly all right. This was really well written!
| ImaniSechelles 1/4/13 . chapter 1
Nice one shot! I like how you characterized them!
| Moongrl088 1/2/13 . chapter 1
Such a cute story. Wish it was a two-shot or something.