Maybe it's because I'm not a Jeremy/ Jane fan, or maybe it was a little too third person and distant, but this really wasn't my favorite story, even chapter one, sorry.

Just FYI, Jeremy needs to be arrested in this story. Even if the police are not keen to pursue a straight rape charge (because that's what this situation is - rape, plain and simple) due to the amount of time that had elapsed in your story, she can press charges. The police will collect a court ordered paternity test and arrest him for statutory rape because she is under 18. He might be able to defeat the charges in court, because he has a valid defense in not knowing her true age, but it is still going to be on his record as having been accused of rape. And the next girl he goes after for being "special" (as statistics show he will) will have that much more evidence to use to get him convicted. I know that in the show she's very concerned about her secret, but I don't think she's selfish enough to put her secret above protecting other girls from a predator.

Also just in case you didn't know for the future chapters, a human pregnancy lasts 10 months, not 9. It's often referred to as 9 months because the expected birth will be that long after the first major indicator, which is the missed period (you can still have a brief, light period during the initial weeks of a pregnancy). But in actuality, from conception to ideal delivery is 40 weeks or 10 months. Just a common mistake I often see in stories.

Please dont stop writing this story was a good idea i want to know what will jeremey reaction to jane being pregnant you make readers more interested in this story if there is a big thing that happens to jeremey and jane

I am really enjoying this story! I do hope you continue it.

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Jane and jeremy had sex. And she might be pregnant

Come on :3 we want more