|Reviews for As We Go Along|
| SixtiesManchesterTeatime 5/30/13 . chapter 21
OH. MY. GOSH. WE. NEED. A. SEQUEL!
| EveningInHornersCorners 12/4/12 . chapter 21
Gear! Groovy! Fab!
-SIX MONTHS! ENTIRELY AND TOTALLY OUTRAGEOUS! Seriously, you lovebirds, you don't HAVE to pair them up...
-Smart Peter. NEVER try to pair up your friend with your girlfriend's friend. It only leads to disaster.
-But you do anyway...Alas...
-Yeah, I don't like the sound of that last part too much either...
-C'mon Louise. HER SCHEME IS SO OBVIOUS!
-And Davy. HIS SCHEME IS SO OBVIOUS!
-Oh boy. HATE when your date shows up late!
-You're just starting to figure that out, eh? Tsk tsk tsk.
-Louise, you can be SO IMPULSIVE sometimes...
-Glad to see he learned his lesson the first time around...
-Chickens come home to roost, Louise.
-But MEL! REALLY!
-Guys, being patient might be a good idea here...
-"They heard snickers from Micky and Mike, who came down stairs in their pajamas and smirks." That is like the most awesome line ever!
-And where they split up after dinner was so natural; Davy and Louise for a traditional walk, and Peter and Meloney to the playground. I could see it!
Aw, thanks! Overall this was a pretty awesome story. I really enjoyed it. Though I might be biased...
| EveningInHornersCorners 12/3/12 . chapter 20
-Why the two of you are relieved because of that I don't know, but so be it...
-Poor Louise. She must HATE not being allowed to do anything. Ugh!
-And how sweet of Davy to tell her about the time when HE'D gotten appendicitis. I'm sure that made her feel a lot better.
-DAVY! Really! Making such...advances...
-I'm willing to bet that Louise was one of those girls who always said, "I'm never going to fall in love". But then she saw his face...
-The BEACH? Well, it's better than a place with pretty waitresses...
-Ahhh...Wait, how did Micky and Mike get involved with this?
-That's all good and well Pete, but where did you get the 35 cents from?
-Yeah, why does MICKY have to do it? He'll spoil everything with his vaudeville.
-But, in any case, A NIGHT OUT! WAHOO!
| Brigitte 12/2/12 . chapter 19
SUPER! THIS IS AWESOME!
| EveningInHornersCorners 12/2/12 . chapter 19
-Gigs can be so troublesome...
-I too am surprised that Mel didn't go with the old coots.
-In LOVE? I don't know the definition of the term.
-Smart thinking Lou. It's a good idea to always take the cynical way out.
-Gotta hate Micky looming over you. Man.
-FINALLY, he's out.
-Gosh. Such a let down.
| Farfisa68 12/1/12 . chapter 18
This was really sweet too! I am such a hopeless romantic!
| Farfisa68 12/1/12 . chapter 17
That was really sweet!
| Brigitte 12/1/12 . chapter 18
WONDERFUL! Glad she didn't die...though I sort of thought she would.
| EveningInHornersCorners 12/1/12 . chapter 18
-ONLY half an hour? Ha!
-Great line when Peter said that it's HIS job to be childish.
-Yeah Mel, calm down. Seriously.
-Good move not to wake up Davy. You know how much he can flip.
-Well, glad the sugery was successful.
-Mel and Pete fall asleep AGAIN.
-Well, let's see Lou. Your appendix was inflamed and you just got it removed, yet you expect to be COMFORTABLE? Really?
-Since LAST NIGHT? Whew!
-Stale muffins aren't fun.
-"...when the doctor came in." What's he gonna say?
| Monkees Fan 1 11/30/12 . chapter 17
"You're gonna be fine, love, I promise." You better keep that promise, Davy...
| Brigitte 11/30/12 . chapter 17
Poor Davy. He loves her so much, but she's gonna die.
| EveningInHornersCorners 11/30/12 . chapter 17
-Tension in the pad...
-"But I was the one who noticed there was something wrong, and I didn't catch it before it was almost too late." Of COURSE Davy blames himself. It's just the natural thing to do...
-"I don't think I'd be able to forgive myself if she didn't make it..." Dun duh da. What if she DOESN'T make it?
-"How did she get it?" What kind of idiots is Lou working for?
-Poor Brad. Why do I feel rivalry coming on...?
-Well naturally she's scared. That's just the way it goes...
-And good for Davy, not explaining the gory details and scaring her even more.
-Though if she makes it, he'll have to share his story with her at some point.
-Even better for Davy to hold back his yelp of pain.
-"I don't wanna lose you." That line is just SO sweet.
UPDATE SOON! WE HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
| Brigitte 11/29/12 . chapter 16
OH MY GOODNESS AN UPDATE I LOVE THIS THIS IS AWESOME POOR LOUISE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
| EveningInHornersCorners 11/29/12 . chapter 16
-I think it's pretty amazing that she made it through the night.
-But still, more pain is never fun...
-Ignoring it? Bad move, Lou...
-"Lou, you're burning up!" Very classic line.
-"I won't let you." he said stepping in front of her stubbornly. THAT, my friend, is an example of Older Brother Syndrome.
-Cut to her work place the next day:
Person One: Is Louise in today?
Person Two: No, she's sick. Apparently she got appendicitis, and some guy friend of hers noticed something was wrong and rushed her to the hospital. It saved her life. Someone said that he proposed to her before she went in for surgery.
Person One: Proposed to Louise? Ha! That's a laugh!
-And of course it would turn out to be a laugh, even though the rumor spreads throughout the entire store...
-Oh, poor Louise! Eventually the pain forces her to give up...
-Now, Davy, no need to go waking everyone up. Just leave a note...
-That's right, we don't need to bring a frieght train into this...
-How old were you when you had appendicitis, Davy?
-Why do I sense that there is going to be some dramatic scene with Davy and Mike in the waiting room, with Davy flipping out...
| Brigitte 11/28/12 . chapter 15
Poor Louise! I feel so bad for her!