Odette was only held captive for about 1 month. You could tell by the stages of the moon. But, they did mess up the moon at one point. Also, why don't Derek and Odette already sleep together? They are married...

Very nice one-shot! A little sad Anya had to pay the death penalty in the end. But the last sentence of this piece reassured me that she was not unloved or forgotten. Anyways great piece of fiction keep up the good work.

Beautiful! Such a sad ending! :')