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  Guest 12/25/12 . chapter 1 I beautiful |
| hello 11/15/12 . chapter 1 Your story was very cute! I liked the love confessions turnout quite a bit! However, there were some punctuational and grammatical errors. Try having someone edit for you one day, and learn from that. The final scenes were awkwardly worded, but still nice. Try to expand your vocabulary with description. Over all, great job! Write more soon, okay? |
