Yay! It's cute! You must update soon! I love it!

Well Puck, now I expect a dance xD. Beautifully written, as always. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work :D.

Nice writing! There were a few typos here and there, but nothing major. And Puck, oh Puck... *swoon*

Awesome chapter! Update soon!

Great chapter!
Update again soon!
:)

This was awesome. It was a longer back story than I'm used to, but you were really thorough and it was a really fun read. I can't wait for the next addition to this! Keep up the good work :D

Mackie

Sorry, I'm too lazy to log in right now.

There were a few grammar/spelling mistakes in here that I couldn't help but pick up on, but don't worry about it; they happen to the best of us. :)

Great chapter! Grim was fairly believable, I thought, but he's a harder character to write, too. The first part was beautiful, and that first line was just awesome. I wasn't a big fan of the poem in the middle, but it was a unique, interesting way to describe Leufeia.

And the italicized part... oh, I just loved it!

Queen of Air and Darkness

This is great, just what I needed to read after a horrible day at the doctor office. I had to get up at 6 and I just got back home, I must have seen almost everyone in the hosptial. Anyway, you really have the charators down pat. The back-story is interesting and Titiana's and Grim's reactions are great. So...that's all I really have to say, till the next chapter :)

I thought you did very good. The characters are t blown out of proportion or rendered unrecognizable. And the story is fascinating.

I really liked the way you wrote Grim and I really loved this chapter :)
You are a really amazing writer!

omg! i was going to write a fanfic about a spring princess too! but you beat me to it. if i write it it will look like i am stealing your great story.

Wow. I'm just... wow.

In a good way, I mean.

That was awesome. Totally awesome. With the prologue, I disliked the way it was laid out at first, in the middle, but then I actually really liked it. And the writing is superb. I love Laufeia and her back story, and just, god, your writing... it ranks in the top five best unpublished writers I have ever read. Not a lot of light is shed on Titania in the books, and you're just taking her to a whole new level. There are a lot of fics like this out there - a pre-Meghan girl in love with Puck - but so far, this is one of the least cliched things I have read. I know that could possibly be because this was originally not a fanfic, and so it could change, but I really hope not, because it's just...
Amazing.

Simply amazing. I don't even know how to put it into words.

Huh, I think that was just one of the nicest reviews I've ever written.

I like Laufeia and this story very much, please update whenever you can! :)

I think she is somewhat innocent, but it works because she's hardly been outside od the Summer grounds all that much. Great chapter!

Laufeia? Well its nice to see a girl who isn't stuck in a love triangle (I'm bashing the movies or books, but Twilight, The Hunger Games and Iron Fey are all kind of the same. One girl with two hot guys madly in love with her. Yeah, like that happens everyday)

Anyway, back to Laufeia seems like a strong girl who can handle anything that comes her way. Including a broken heart. Can't wait to see how everything unfolds :).

Don't worry about a long boring back story; it wasn't that long and certainly not boring. You got the Who, What, Where and Why of your story without it going on and going. All in all there isn't anything I would change.